Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14

[Lars Eggert <[e-mail]>]

Meral, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars

On 2022-7-28, at 0:00, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2022-07-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> In Intro section please clarify benefits of this RFC formalizing the
> description of the compression rules. :
> 
> "The goal of this document is to formalize the description of the rules to
> offer" to allow X Y Z ?
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> [Page 3], Section 3, Typo
> "options definied"-->"options defined"
> 
> [Page 3], Section 3, Typo
> "serveur"-->"server"
> 
> [Page 6], Section 3.7, Typo
> "same enconding."-->"same encoding."
> 
> [Page 7], Section 3.10.1, Typo
> "unidirectionnal,"--->"unidirectional,"
> 
> [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo
> "range sould"-->"range should"
> "recommandation"-->"recommendation"
> 
> [Page 10], Section 3.10.5, Typo
> "the the"-->"the"
> 
> [Page 10], Section 4, Typo
> "idenfied"-->"identified"
> 
> [Page 33], Typo x2
> "bidirectionnal is forbiden"-->"bidirectional is forbidden"
> 
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