[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-13
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From: Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Linda, Thanks for the review and comments. I have fixed the nits. Version -14 will address your comments. Rgds Shraddha Juniper Business Use Only -----Original Message----- From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sent: Friday, May 17, 2024 4:46 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-13 [External Email. Be cautious of content] Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!FGPkljAmmo5fPhzWVjf_OKCZyI4M5Igb7fkavkJdcy81YUf1auiwMvOkHpdBzxGpOgaXZGWv73c_8BvK$ >. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-?? Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2024-05-16 IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-17 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Major issues: None Minor issues:None Nits/editorial comments: Abstract: Should "exisiting" be "existing" ? Section 2: should "treaceroute" be "traceroute"? Thank you, Linda
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-m… Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
- [Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ie… Shraddha Hegde