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Hi Linda,

Thanks for the review and comments.
I have fixed the nits.
Version -14 will address your comments.

Rgds
Shraddha


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Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-05-16
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Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract: Should +ACI-exisiting+ACI- be +ACI-existing+ACI- ?

Section 2: should +ACI-treaceroute+ACI- be +ACI-traceroute+ACI-?

Thank you,
Linda