Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-25

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Tue, 16 October 2018 16:38 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Fixed the editorial nit in my local copy.

Thanks,
Kent



-----Original Message-----
From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, October 16, 2018 at 3:45 AM
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-25
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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard Track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. In the editorial note the change log is in appendix D and not A