[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Fri, 07 November 2014 09:18 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141104 IETF LC End Date: 20141106 IESG Telechat date: 20141125 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments (BTW what is the favorite spelling in Canada: UK or US one?) Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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