[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 09 October 2018 07:02 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I
noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network
management. why not add restconf to introduction?