[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Tue, 25 July 2017 16:52 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with a few minor English nits remaining.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

I notice that a number of the editorial comments in 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-09-genart-lc-bryant-2016-12-12/

were not addressed, but I am sure the RFC Editor will pick them up.

I notice that RFC7952 is in the reference list but not called out in the text.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i… Stewart Bryant
Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of d… Susan Hares
Re: [Gen-art] [i2rs] Genart last call review of d… Alexander Clemm