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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Wed, 25 November 2015 23:52 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.
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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"
-[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?


Best Regards,
Meral
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