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Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14

Rishabh Parekh <rishabhp@gmail.com> Fri, 09 June 2023 17:02 UTC

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Date: Fri, 09 Jun 2023 10:02:02 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [spring] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14
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Thomas,
Thanks for the review. We will address your editorial comments in next
revision.

-Rishabh

On Fri, Jun 9, 2023 at 9:03 AM Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> Document: draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review Date: 2023-06-09
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-06-19
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
>
> The premise is I am not a routing expert and I only had a high level
> understanding of segment routing before reading this document.  That
> said, I have very much enjoyed the clarity and precision of the material
> presented and I think the authors have done a really good job, thank
> you!  (BTW, I have found the terminology section especially useful to
> navigate the rest of the draft.)
>
> The instructions to IANA are concise and clear.
>
> >From a Gen-ART perspective I reckon the document is ready.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> * §1.1, 3rd bullet: s/period/period./
> * §2.1, 4th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/
> * §2.2, 3rd para: s/Again note/Again, note/
> * §2.2, 4th para: s/this document/this document./
> * §2.2, 5th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/
> * §2.2.1, 2nd para: s/contains following/contains the following/
> * §2.2.1, Replication State info model: s/maybe be empty/may be empty/
> * §2.2.1: s/in a SRH. As per psuedo-code/in an SRH. As per pseudo-code/
> * §2.2.2: s/apriori/a priori/
> * §2.2.3: s/this same restrictions/this same restriction/
> * §4: s/catalog/catalogue/
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