Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id DE1F221F85B9 for ; Wed, 28 Dec 2011 06:08:48 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -101.722 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-101.722 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=-0.877, BAYES_00=-2.599, MIME_BASE64_TEXT=1.753, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100] Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id Ffb0OkNCa1LO for ; Wed, 28 Dec 2011 06:08:48 -0800 (PST) Received: from a.painless.aaisp.net.uk (auth.a.painless.aaisp.net.uk [IPv6:2001:8b0:0:30:230:48ff:fe72:d05c]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 953EA21F84E5 for ; Wed, 28 Dec 2011 06:08:47 -0800 (PST) Received: from 250.254.187.81.in-addr.arpa ([81.187.254.250]) by a.painless.aaisp.net.uk with esmtpsa (TLSv1:AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.72) (envelope-from ) id 1RfuBQ-00030Q-3c; Wed, 28 Dec 2011 14:08:44 +0000 From: Elwyn Davies To: Russ Housley In-Reply-To: References: <959C9572EE64483085D6D33F0533F48A@davidPC> Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="=-lxMsYYlHlCaZ2JEn9l+t" Date: Wed, 28 Dec 2011 14:10:32 +0000 Message-Id: <1325081432.7254.34.camel@mightyatom.folly.org.uk> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.26.3 Cc: draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect.all@tools.ietf.org, General Area Review Team Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect-07:(with DISCUSS) X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 28 Dec 2011 14:08:49 -0000 --=-lxMsYYlHlCaZ2JEn9l+t Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Hi, Russ. I hope you have had a good Christmas break. I responded to David Black's previous query about this on December 14 (see attached, copied to you at the time). However... I have just had a look at the -09 version provoked by David Harrington's comments. I think I may have been a little premature in signing off on that version as the RTR frame discussion did still need improvement. Verion -09 definitely fixes that issue IMO. However, I think that the note added to the end of Section 10 regarding the addition of further 'not-so-private' data perhaps needs another sentence about ordering, as per my and David's comments. Apart from that, I believe we are all done here - I have also reviewed the IANA registries draft in the last couple of days. Best wishes for the New Year. Regards, Elwyn On Fri, 2011-12-23 at 13:17 -0500, Russ Housley wrote: > Elwyn: > > > Have your concerns been addressed. > > > Russ > > = = = = = = = = > > Discuss (2011-09-30) > > The Gen-ART Review by Elwyn Davies on 26-Sept-2011 raises some > concerns that deserve a response. Please find the review at > http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg06754.html. > > > > Begin forwarded message: > > > From: "David Harrington" > > > > Date: December 22, 2011 7:12:31 PM EST > > > > To: "'Russ Housley'" > > > > Subject: RE: Russ Housley's Discuss on > > draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect-07:(with DISCUSS) > > > > > > Hi Russ, > > > > Can you check your DISCUSS on draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect? > > I believe we have addressed all of Elwyn's concerns. > > http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg06754.html. > > > > Thanks, and have a Merry Christmas! > > David Harrington > > Director, IETF Transport Area > > ietfdbh@comcast.net (preferred for ietf) > > dbharrington@huaweisymantec.com > > +1 603 828 1401 (cell) > > > > > > --=-lxMsYYlHlCaZ2JEn9l+t Content-Disposition: inline Content-Description: Attached message - Re: FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect-07: (with DISCUSS) Content-Type: message/rfc822 Subject: Re: FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-storm-mpa-peer-connect-07: (with DISCUSS) From: Elwyn Davies To: david.black@emc.com Cc: arkady.kanevsky@gmail.com, ttalpey@microsoft.com, housley@vigilsec.com In-Reply-To: <7C4DFCE962635144B8FAE8CA11D0BF1E05A000D1B6@MX14A.corp.emc.com> References: <7C4DFCE962635144B8FAE8CA11D0BF1E05A000D1B6@MX14A.corp.emc.com> Content-Type: text/plain; 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