IETF Logo Mail Archive

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Sat, 18 November 2017 00:54 UTC

Return-Path: <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id E675D128B27; Fri, 17 Nov 2017 16:54:33 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.2
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.2 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 9Xa389JMUijx; Fri, 17 Nov 2017 16:54:32 -0800 (PST)
Received: from usplmg20.ericsson.net (usplmg20.ericsson.net [198.24.6.45]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F3410120725; Fri, 17 Nov 2017 16:54:28 -0800 (PST)
X-AuditID: c618062d-8d7ff70000004288-ec-5a0f84c30677
Received: from EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.81]) by usplmg20.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id FF.A4.17032.4C48F0A5; Sat, 18 Nov 2017 01:54:28 +0100 (CET)
Received: from EUSAAMB104.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.121]) by EUSAAHC003.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.81]) with mapi id 14.03.0352.000; Fri, 17 Nov 2017 19:54:27 -0500
From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
To: "draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org" <draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt.all@ietf.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Thread-Index: AdNgB6yY9jj5oPXlSxirD4NdewN5IQ==
Date: Sat, 18 Nov 2017 00:54:26 +0000
Message-ID: <ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A4F639544@eusaamb104.ericsson.se>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.10]
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_ABCAA4EF18F17B4FB619EA93DEF7939A4F639544eusaamb104erics_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFrrHLMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPoO6RFv4og597hSyWzp7GbnH11WcW ByaPJUt+MgUwRnHZpKTmZJalFunbJXBlfLnyl7lgvVbF9OlL2RoYD6h2MXJySAiYSDybtIW1 i5GLQ0jgCKNEw5bnbBDOciDn7WUWkCo2AQuJ7b+fg1WJCDQxShw5epwRJCEs4CTxcPZONhBb RMBdYtqu54wQtp7E0UunwJpZBFQlZjyexwxi8wr4Skw7+IEVxGYUEJP4fmoNE4jNLCAucevJ fCaIkwQkluw5zwxhi0q8fPyPFcJWkpi09ByQzQFUny9x4Wg6xEhBiZMzn7BMYBSchWTSLISq WUiqIEp0JBbs/sQGYWtLLFv4mhnGPnPgMROy+AJG9lWMHKXFBTm56UYGmxiBoX5Mgk13B+P9 6Z6HGAU4GJV4eHcX80cJsSaWFVfmHmKU4GBWEuGdsZwvSog3JbGyKrUoP76oNCe1+BCjNAeL kjjvGU/eKCGB9MSS1OzU1ILUIpgsEwenVAOjSqHszoBWR53e8nwbP4/AXD8xxqPXv3172+zQ y/jV59WcvUwxATksV+JV7kaszdVVnfGidZPrOq0Z3XLNv7sXF2Xd7n7i18BQMTl61uzbagml R17Eh3VzJho9327Q7BiQ2v+24HlNXuUjU67uhHPc93sn71HLV+T7pPKa82KDcob6TOk5x5RY ijMSDbWYi4oTAaUIoCdxAgAA
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Bt36qmxFfZ8FJENE55zop5kjEmY>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 18 Nov 2017 00:54:34 -0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.


Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-11-17
IETF LC End Date:  2017-12-04
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes"
-[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions"
-[Page 35], typo "7.1.  Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1.  Effect of Encrypted ACKs"
-[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty.
-Please change the few occurrences of "middle box" to  "middlebox"

Best Regards,
Meral
---
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email