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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06

Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Fri, 22 June 2012 17:46 UTC

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From: Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com>
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Date: Fri, 22 Jun 2012 13:46:58 -0400
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Thanks a lot!


Wassim H.

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On Jun 22, 2012, at 10:37, "Ben Niven-Jenkins" <ben@velocix.com> wrote:

> Wassim,
> 
> Thanks for the review, please see below:
> 
> On 19/06/2012 19:44, "Wassim Haddad" <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
>> 
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may
>> receive.
>> 
>> Document:  draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06
>> Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
>> Review Date: 2012-06-19
>> IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-06
>> IESG Telechat date: 2012-06-21
>> 
>> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as informational standard
>> but one (helpful) addition is suggested.
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: 
>> 
>> - Sectiom 1.1: suggest defining "Quality of Experience" (mentioned 4
>> times in the document)
> 
> In my working copy, I have added the following to the terminology section:
> 
>   Quality of Experience (QoE): As defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6390]
> 
> (Thanks Benoit for the pointer)
> 
> Ben

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