Re: [Gen-art] [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-09

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Mon, 16 December 2019 12:59 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-09
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-09
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Hi Valery,

    >> Q1:
    >> 
    >> The Security Considerations lists IKEv2/IPSec algorithms that are not
    >> considered quantum-resistant. However, that is not mentioned anywhere else. I
    >> think it would be good to mention that in the Abstract and/or Introduction.
    >
    > Introduction already contains the following text:
    >
    >   If the preshared key has
    >   sufficient entropy and the PRF, encryption and authentication
    >   transforms are quantum-secure, then the resulting system is believed
    >   to be quantum resistant, that is, invulnerable to an attacker with a
    >   quantum computer.
    >
    > We think that it is out of scope of this document to classify existing
    > algorithms on the ground of whether they are quantum secure or not,
    > the Security Considerations section lists only most obvious cases.

I was thinking of just adding (to the text you referenced above) something like:

"The Security Considerations gives some examples of algorithms that are not considered quantum-resistant."

But, if you don't think it is needed, I am fine with that. It was only a minor issue, so :)

Regards,

Christer