Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Dong Jiang <knight.dongjiang@gmail.com> Wed, 02 December 2015 07:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
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Dear Meral,

Thank you for your review. We'll revise the draft accordingly.

Best regards,
Jiang Dong

2015-11-26 1:52 GMT+02:00 Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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> Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2015-11-25
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> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
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> IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types
> is"
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> -[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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