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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-05

Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com> Tue, 15 August 2023 14:36 UTC

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From: Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com>
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Date: Tue, 15 Aug 2023 07:35:54 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-05
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Thanks for the review, Thomas! I’ve merged your nits PR into our working copy.

Best,
Tommy

> On Aug 15, 2023, at 12:22 AM, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-??
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review Date: 2023-08-15
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-21
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This document describes:
> * how a server can advertise through DNS that it offers Oblivious HTTP
> * how a client can learn the URI to use for the gateway using a well-known URI
> * how the gateway's key configuration can be fetched via the well-known URI
> 
> The document is very clearly written with good examples at the right places.
> 
> Applicability and security considerations are thorough.
> 
> The IANA section looks good.
> 
> Major issues: none
> 
> Minor issues: none
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: just a couple, which I packed in a PR.
> 
>

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