[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 03 July 2012 22:25 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-urn-sub-ns-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-07-03
IETF LC End Date: 2012-07-11

Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- section 2:

The RFC 2119 boilerplate is present, but I don't notice any 2119 normative language.

-- section 4, first sentence: "None not already inherent to using URNs."

Sentence Fragment.

-- section 5.1, last bullet, "... values subordinate to urn:ietf:params:oauth are of the from ..."

Missing word?