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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 22 February 2018 05:48 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2018 21:48:09 -0800
Cc: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07
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Roni, thanks for your review. Jorge, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 8, 2018, at 6:06 AM, Rabadan, Jorge (Nokia - US/Mountain View) <jorge.rabadan@nokia.com> wrote:
> 
> Thank you Roni.
> I fixed the nits you referred to.
> 
> Jorge
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
> Date: Thursday, February 8, 2018 at 3:02 PM
> To: "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
> Cc: "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage.all@ietf.org>, "ietf@ietf.org" <ietf@ietf.org>, "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org>
> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-07
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>    Reviewer: Roni Even
>    Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
>    I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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>    Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-usage-??
>    Reviewer: Roni Even
>    Review Date: 2018-02-08
>    IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-09
>    IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22
> 
>    Summary:
>    The document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC
> 
>    Major issues:
> 
>    Minor issues:
> 
>    Nits/editorial comments:
>    In section 3.1 toward the end "For example, we can use ingress replication for
>    on EVI100" no need for "for on"
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