Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12

Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com> Mon, 06 January 2020 13:22 UTC

Return-Path: <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 98520120836; Mon, 6 Jan 2020 05:22:40 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.997
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.997 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id cmkpL3J5X7Pg; Mon, 6 Jan 2020 05:22:38 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail-ed1-x530.google.com (mail-ed1-x530.google.com [IPv6:2a00:1450:4864:20::530]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 98C6D120812; Mon, 6 Jan 2020 05:22:35 -0800 (PST)
Received: by mail-ed1-x530.google.com with SMTP id f8so3828188edv.2; Mon, 06 Jan 2020 05:22:35 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc; bh=s+H1Kdbl/RAwJDy20GKGDLk4Fhy4sxp6GLq9HVPme5A=; b=K18GZXr/o8iwAkM4vkQ4m1gJHfYhYWMVJZnKWXwZUY00Ytkn0m3olr1lvgY2G2jHwp b6hMFMRQFe26UrPoJtS16EcnrCOvv4cZc4bTu7yDu6ZEL/Xjh6E/e6gl22XhvkmMoI65 sUrRr2nh8XAdVs7undJjbCXB0FEktq8bWp+fVoy2454YWFf9fkKVnK+vs+hBOJQSsyLP F7kQy40BPBnj8yBOE+jgXH+HodSXU/ERIzGFtCZ76AnEP9WoeiZd2nGfpSC0BepoQMPS j9ojeGkS67lw2odj7wWtSZOX/a3x8wyiC9jaL8RK3xZUZqEQYu/yavk3rqMsmgD/8oIe AR1g==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=s+H1Kdbl/RAwJDy20GKGDLk4Fhy4sxp6GLq9HVPme5A=; b=cJGOAVKRyBUNA4dE1PNS9wKsZlWV2ZocprH/iaJwhsOTznSgSI0tq9Pv1byIMGXEOp B8lkVl9Tx6A4035bYEtZSY4sq3jfJxU5LGLnvyGV8x2kqQo1qNivNDP2FwyOEb03oSjY Nm/n7Ze58iJo5x8afmJzmZ98RSngHkJjVSW5d4qKHW7vkw/5vSl64Ts+I2XJF0F8pSwB eBEcaNNbLYelqplRwBtmy4voBKZ8NU0soBuxggGFAStu2u4Mha/yyrqZmumywH7yKCYS AITeO3AIOUHoIzaaR4QgLeb4hkzG7Er8+R32ldJaanjKddvuvmDBolJMLzxbSPmL3MT/ PWzA==
X-Gm-Message-State: APjAAAW4NzbjIfYPuDqRS0Drt8uCoB7v2BERlGfN/Pqljb2xwGKX1cf6 iV9Es1GXes5LazO/IuPMF0bTc+Jk2wZSGJ7f2+c=
X-Google-Smtp-Source: APXvYqzavjrZjlyHDJC1lCXgURlvSNukJCe2X2XLLrQ4MaqM11b7pqrIID5Rv4/LlcKJWiGwjUavWYi3xM6zOZRF+1g=
X-Received: by 2002:a17:906:a14:: with SMTP id w20mr108071215ejf.274.1578316954042; Mon, 06 Jan 2020 05:22:34 -0800 (PST)
MIME-Version: 1.0
References: <157738205168.25158.4526698679187450680@ietfa.amsl.com> <MN2PR11MB356573B795C9488B81B4EED8D83C0@MN2PR11MB3565.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
In-Reply-To: <MN2PR11MB356573B795C9488B81B4EED8D83C0@MN2PR11MB3565.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
From: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 06 Jan 2020 07:22:20 -0600
Message-ID: <CAMMTW_+vM_w643ufn4-i8arcGdNbVDAaBMHH1j3FB=QjLNzoig@mail.gmail.com>
To: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
Cc: "gen-art >> General area reviewing team" <gen-art@ietf.org>, last-call@ietf.org, "draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd.all@ietf.org>, "6lo@ietf.org" <6lo@ietf.org>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="00000000000063860d059b788d2b"
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/DM755pL-BGnn41cOMNnnkA98ozo>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 Jan 2020 13:22:40 -0000

Dear Pascal, that works for me.  Thanks for attending my comments.
Cheers,
- vijay

On Mon, Jan 6, 2020, 4:17 AM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
wrote:

> Hello Vijay
>
> Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym.
> The proposed modified sentence is;
> "
> In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration
> mechanism
> that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address
> Detection (DAD)
> mechanism defined in IPv6 ND.
> "
>
>  It will show up with the next revision.
>
> Many thanks!
>
> Pascal
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> > Sent: jeudi 26 décembre 2019 18:41
> > To: gen-art@ietf.org
> > Cc: last-call@ietf.org; draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd.all@ietf.org; 6lo@ietf.org
> > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
> >
> > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> > Review result: Ready
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review
> > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG
> for the
> > IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
> >
> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >
> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> > Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12
> > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> > Review Date: 2019-12-26
> > IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-09
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
> >
> > Major issues: 0.
> >
> > Minor issues: 0.
> >
> > Nits/editorial comments: 1.
> >
> > 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used
> in
> > S7.1.  The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > - vijay
> >
>
>