Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01

Pierre-Anthony Lemieux <pal@sandflow.com> Tue, 05 July 2016 17:26 UTC

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Hi Vijay,

> I will appreciate if the "including 'urn:eidr:'" part made it into the draft.

Ok.

BTW, should I plan on creating a new I-D before the scheduled
telechat, or after?

Thanks,

-- Pierre

On Tue, Jul 5, 2016 at 10:21 AM, Vijay K. Gurbani <vkg@bell-labs.com> wrote:
> Pierre: Thank you for attending to my comment.  More inline.
>
> On 07/02/2016 03:30 PM, Pierre-Anthony Lemieux wrote:
>>
>> Hi Vijay,
>>
>> I appreciate the review and comment.
>>
>>> That is, are the schemes (urn, eidr) part of the case-insensitive string
>>> match?
>>
>>
>> Yes, it looks like
>>
>> "Lexical equivalence of EIDR-URN is defined by case-insensitive string
>> match."
>>
>> should say
>>
>> "Lexical equivalence of URN-EIDR is defined by case-insensitive string
>> match."
>>
>> This would confirm that the entire URN-EIDR string defined in
>> "Declaration of syntactic structure" is considered for matching,
>> including "urn:eidr:".
>
>
> I will appreciate if the "including 'urn:eidr:'" part made it into the
> draft.  Implementers have varying level understanding as they attempt
> to divine RFC text.  So to the extent that we can make our intent
> explicit with a few additional strokes of the pen (or the keyboard), we
> are all the more better off for it.
>
> Cheers,
>
> - vijay
> --
> Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks
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