[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-instance-08

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Wed, 18 January 2012 09:54 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-multi-instance-08
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2012-01-18
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2012-01-19

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.2:
   compatibility the base OSPF
SHOULD BE:
   compatibility with the base OSPF

   This is IPv4 instance
SHOULD BE:
   This IPv4 instance