Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 29 June 2016 22:19 UTC

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Thanks much, Brian!

Authors, do note Brian’s comments.

Jari

On 24 Jun 2016, at 05:48, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2016-06-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-21
> IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-30
> 
> Summary: Ready
> --------
> 
> Comment:
> --------
> 
> This is a long document but well written, so there is little to say about it.
> 
> Minor issues:
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> 
> The Conclusion section could be deleted. It doesn't add anything.
> 
> There are a lot of Informational references that are still personal I-Ds. Many of
> them are not even listed as "Related Internet-Drafts" for the Alto WG. I think readers
> of the future RFC will find this a bit annoying.
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> Nits:
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> <jan.seedorf@neclab.eu> and <martin.stiemerling@neclab.eu> bounced
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