Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 17 December 2015 13:00 UTC

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Thanks for your review!

Jari

On 24 Nov 2015, at 21:28, Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

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> Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
>    An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles
> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
> Review Date: 24-November-2015
> IETF LC End Date: 4- December-2015
> IESG Telechat date: N/A
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> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
>    In the introduction, would it be more accurate to say that this is for use when the server operator has received and is complying with a legal demand ...?
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