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Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03

Mohit Sahni <mohit06jan@gmail.com> Wed, 02 September 2020 15:38 UTC

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From: Mohit Sahni <mohit06jan@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 02 Sep 2020 08:38:40 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03
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Hi Francesca,
Thanks for the comments, I will make these changes.

Regards,
Mohit

On Wed, Sep 2, 2020 at 2:54 AM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <
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> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03
> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review Date: 2020-09-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> should be fixed before publication.
>
> Major issues: -
>
> Minor issues: -
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Section 1:
> OLD:
> This extension was
>    previously defined in section 4.1.1 of [RFC6960]
> NEW:
> This extension was
>    previously defined in section 4.4.1 of [RFC6960]
>
> Section 2:
> The message format for the OCSP request and response is defined in
>    the [RFC6960].  It also defines the standard extensions for OCSP
>    messages based on the extension model employed in X.509 version 3
>    certificates (see [RFC5280]).
>
> "It" in the second sentence is ambiguous, I think it would be better to
> replace
> with "[RFC6960]".
>
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