[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-06-17
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: This is very much a review by a non-specialist. The document is well
written, but has a small number of nits that need looking at before publication.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
ID-Nits points out the following:
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4091
(Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4092
(Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>From the text it looks like the updated RFC should be the reference that this
memo uses.
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The following abbreviations are not in the RFC Editor's well known list and
should be expanded on first use:
STUN
SDP
FQDN
PSTN
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-m… Stewart Bryant via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of… Roman Shpount
- Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of… Roman Shpount