[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Mon, 28 November 2016 18:09 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area 
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the 
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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2016-11-28
IETF LC End Date: 2016-11-30
IESG Telechat date: 2016-12-01

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Issues: IdNits reports a couple of outdated references that should be 
updated, but this will be done as a matter of course.