[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Sun, 05 February 2017 21:43 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational

Major issues:

Minor issues:
    The second figure in section 4.4 talks about the use of multiple
3x3 tables, but appears to show the use of multiple 4x4 tables.  This
reader found himself confused.

Nits/editorial comments: