[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-appsawg-mime-default-charset-03
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Fri, 27 April 2012 18:15 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-appsawg-mime-default-charset-03
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-mime-default-charset-03 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Apr-27-2012 IETF LC End Date: May-07-2012 IESG Telechat date: May-10-2012 Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 1 Nit: For better readability, I would suggest the following change in S1: s/value used when it is not/value used when the parameter is not/ Other than that, it is ready to go. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani@alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/
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