[Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-srlg-collect-06
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@folly.org.uk> Fri, 03 June 2016 13:38 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-srlg-collect-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-srlg-collect-06.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2016/06/03 IETF LC End Date: 2016/06/10 IESG Telechat date: 2016/06/16 Summary: Ready. This version contains some minor editorial updates from -04 which addressed all my comments during the previous last call. Thanks for addressing the rather more substantial comments on -02. There are a couple of trivial nits noted below. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: s4.2, Length field: It should be noted that the length is encoded as an unsigned binary integer. s4.2, Reserved field: For consistency with the SRLG ID field description, the (duplicate) size of the field should be removed. Thus in the description: s/This 15-bit field/This field/
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf… Jari Arkko
- [Gen-art] Gen-art 2nd LC review of draft-ietf-tea… Elwyn Davies