[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-email-deep-09

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 16 October 2017 05:18 UTC

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Date: Sun, 15 Oct 2017 22:18:25 -0700
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-email-deep-09

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-uta-email-deep-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-10-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26

Summary: The document is almost ready to be published as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:
1. In the document I noticed that key words like recommended are sometime
written in upper case letters and sometime in lower case. is there a reason?. I
suggest that in section 2 reference RFC 8174 and verify that normative text is
in upper case letters. 2. In section 3.3 I think the text suggests transition
period of couple of years. I think that it would be better to just say that
both mechanisms SHOULD be supported and delete the sentence about transition
period. I also wonder why is it a SHOULD and not a MUST, in which case both
mechanisms will not be supported.

Nits/editorial comments:

1. In section 3.4 what is "gracefully close" is there a reference?
2. In section 4  fourth bullet what is near term? I assume that as long as
there is no other document that says otherwise MSPs SHOULD also provide it. 3.
In section 4.1 " password sent as cleartext SHOULD be required to change" I
think it means "MUST change"

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-u… Roni Even
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Keith Moore
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Roni Even
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper