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Suresh,

Thank you for you review.
ok with your two comments; additional details inlined.

Cheers,
Bruno

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com]
> Envoyé : samedi 10 mai 2008 00:31
> À : General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea@tools.ietf.org
> Cc : mpls-ads@tools.ietf.org; mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org
> Objet : Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea-03.txt
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
> draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-interarea-03.txt
> 
> For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication but I have two minor
> comments.
> 
> Minor
> =====
> 
> * The document uses a weird form of depicting prefixes e.g. 192.0.2/24
> used in multiple locations. These should be properly written as
> 192.0.2.0/24.

OK. Updated in my local version of the draft.
 
> * The document uses the address 192.0.0.0/16 as an example address while
> the address range to be used for documentation is 192.0.2.0/24. I
> recommend staying inside this block for examples.

OK.
The addresses has been renumbered as follow: 
192.0.0.0/16 --> 192.0.2.0/24
192.0.2.0/24 --> 192.0.2.0/26

Updated in my local version of the draft.
 
> Cheers
> Suresh
> 
> 
> 

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