Re: [Gen-art] GenART last call review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03

jouni korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Wed, 14 March 2012 12:49 UTC

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Roni,

Thanks for the review. We'll take care of the editorials.

- Jouni

On Mar 13, 2012, at 1:24 PM, Roni Even wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document: draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date:2012–3–13
> IETF LC End Date: 2012–3–22
> IESG Telechat date:
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Section 5.1.1 third paragraph change to  “provided by some”
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