Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry-07

Gabriel Montenegro <Gabriel.Montenegro@microsoft.com> Thu, 08 December 2016 22:17 UTC

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From: Gabriel Montenegro <Gabriel.Montenegro@microsoft.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry.all@ietf.org>, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
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Thanks for the quick turnaround, Russ!

I've corrected this in my working copy. Will wait a couple more days in case there are other nits or comments coming in...

Thanks,

Gabriel

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com]
> Sent: Thursday, December 8, 2016 14:04
> To: draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry.all@ietf.org
> Cc: IETF Gen-ART <gen-art@ietf.org>;
> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry-07
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
> IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
> posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-6lo-dispatch-iana-registry-07
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2016-12-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2016-12-15
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Thank you for addressing my comments on version -06 of this document.
> 
> 
> Major Concerns: None
> 
> Minor Concerns: None
> 
> Nit:  In Section 1, paragraph 1, it says:
> 
> 	... not defined in either [RFC4944] and [RFC6282].
> 
> s/and/or/