Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09

Sri Gundavelli <sgundave@cisco.com> Mon, 16 January 2012 16:36 UTC

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Date: Mon, 16 Jan 2012 08:35:53 -0800
From: Sri Gundavelli <sgundave@cisco.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration.all@tools.ietf.org>
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Hi Chris,

Thanks for the review.

These terms are from RFC-5213. The spec did point to the base specs. But,
will ensure we add the references to those terms at first usage. I¹ll note
this comment.



Regards
Sri





On 1/16/12 6:14 AM, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
> please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >.
>  
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a
> new version of the draft.
>  
> Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09
> Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
> Review Date: 16 January 2012
> IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012
> IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012
>  
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> should be fixed before publication.
>  
> Major issues: -
>  
> Minor issues: -
>  
> Nits/editorial comments:
>  
> - The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchors,
> but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those.
>  
> Regards,
>  
> Christer
>  
>