Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt

Kazuhiro Mishima <three@sfc.wide.ad.jp> Wed, 26 October 2011 08:32 UTC

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Francis,

thanks for your comments

IMO, it has no problem on changing these points.
If another authors have some comment, please inform.

Thank you!
Kazuhiro


2011/10/24 Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-payload-rfc3189bis-02.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20111014
> IETF LC End Date: 20110926
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments: I've seen some comments during the last call,
> perhaps this is why the current version is 03 but I reviewed (and forgot
> to send the review) the version 02.
> Comments:
>  - 3.3.1 page 14: I suggest m=* in place of m=??
>
>  - 4 page 15 (comment): in general encryption is done after
>  compression for crypto reasons and common sense: encryption gives a
>  perfectly random result, i.e., something impossible to compress...
>
>  - Authors' Addresses page 19: United States -> USA
>
> Regards (and sorry for the delay, but my comments could (should!) be handled
> by the RFC Editor)
>
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
>