[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-09

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 18 October 2019 23:32 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-10-18
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. No other comments than those expressed on the mailing list.

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Best Regards,
Meral
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