Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11

"Christian M. Amsüss" <christian@amsuess.com> Wed, 09 December 2020 14:10 UTC

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From: Christian =?iso-8859-1?B?TS4gQW1z/HNz?= <christian@amsuess.com>
To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-echo-request-tag-11
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Hello Ines,

thanks for your comments.

The expansions are done or WIP in our version, and will be part of the
next editing iteration.

> 2.- Figure 1 and Figure 4 have two columns named "U" (Unsafe), is that Ok?, or
> should one of these columns be deleted/renamed?

That's indeed unfortunate; given tables of this format are common in
CoRE, I'll be checking back for the best course of action (but either
way it's to be fixed).

Best regards
Christian

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