Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11

"Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com> Thu, 06 December 2018 07:46 UTC

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From: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com>
To: Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Joel, 

Thanks for your review. 

We will replace the references in abstract with text in next version. 

Best regards,
Jie

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joel Halpern [mailto:jmh@joelhalpern.com]
> Sent: Friday, November 30, 2018 4:38 AM
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> Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org;
> opsawg@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
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> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2018-11-29
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-12-06
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues: N/A
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>     As id-nits notes, references should not be included in the abstract.
>