Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-par-08

Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com> Mon, 07 June 2021 14:58 UTC

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From: Brian Campbell <bcampbell@pingidentity.com>
Date: Mon, 7 Jun 2021 08:57:36 -0600
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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-par-08
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Thanks for the review, Meral. We'll get that issue fixed in the next
revision.

On Sun, Jun 6, 2021 at 5:53 PM Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
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> Document: draft-ietf-oauth-par-08
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2021-06-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-08
> IESG Telechat date: NA
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.
>
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 4], Sec 1.1, "because the the request "---->"because the request "
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> Best Regards,
> Meral Shirazipour
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