[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-benchmarking-stateful-06

[Robert Sparks via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-benchmarking-stateful-06

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2024-05-22
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC with nits

Nits/editorial comments:

There are places in the text that say "The authors are aware" - the
construction seems out of place for a consensus IETF stream document - I'm not
sure if this was the resolution of an argument, or just text that could be
further changed to "Note that" or something similar.

I support the concerns Michael raised in his tsvart review.

Please consider reaching out to the RFC-Editor early for how to best represent
the small block of pseudocode in the xml for the document.