[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06

Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 22 July 2022 00:23 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2022-07-21
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publicaiton as a Proposed standards

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     I think that in augment "/nsfikels:ipsec-ikeless/nsfikels:sad/"
        + "nsfikels:sad-entry" 
     the container ipsec-stats { 
     should have, after if-feature "ipsec-stats";,
   config false;?

Nits/editorial comments: N/A