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Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> Thu, 20 October 2016 19:56 UTC

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Bonjour Francis,

>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>  - ToC page 2 and A page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
>
> I'm using xml2rfc with <?rfc rfcedstyle="yes" ?> that enforces
> "Acknowledgements".  It then seems that the current preferences of the
> RFC Editor have changed.  I'll deactivate that option, and verify it
> does not break something else elsewhere.

It appears that the behaviour of rfcedstyle with the current version of 
xml2rfc does not affect the spelling of "Acknowledgements".  It used to. 
  So I just changed the spelling to follow your suggestion, and I kept 
rfcedstyle active.

FYI, your review is now taken into account:
 
https://github.com/ksmurchison/drafts/commit/27e30ec0a522749d53203d5e9bf0937ecc8196f2

Thanks again for it!
Do not hesitate to tell me in case something is still wrong.

-- 
Julien ÉLIE

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   – La cervoise tiède !!!
   – Non, ça c'est une arme connue. » (Astérix)

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