[Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
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From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2019-10-12 IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. General: I found that I lack the subject matter expertise to meaningfully review this document. I read it carefully, along with one of the references. But it appeared that I would need to internalize quite a number of other references before it would be possible to really follow this. I did review it for form - the document is well written. (Most documents that I review have at least a few problems with form.) IdNits returns a couple of outdated references that should be cleaned up: == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-17 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-rtgwg-atn-bgp-01 I have no other comments.
- [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-dist… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-dmm-… Alissa Cooper