[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Wed, 06 January 2016 04:32 UTC

Return-Path: <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4BE301A9077; Tue, 5 Jan 2016 20:32:29 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.201
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.201 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id B_CdmCurjXa0; Tue, 5 Jan 2016 20:32:27 -0800 (PST)
Received: from usplmg21.ericsson.net (usplmg21.ericsson.net [198.24.6.65]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 9DB251A9074; Tue, 5 Jan 2016 20:32:24 -0800 (PST)
X-AuditID: c6180641-f799c6d000007d66-b8-568c98cac0a4
Received: from EUSAAHC008.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.96]) by usplmg21.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 47.CD.32102.AC89C865; Wed, 6 Jan 2016 05:32:11 +0100 (CET)
Received: from EUSAAMB107.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.124]) by EUSAAHC008.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.96]) with mapi id 14.03.0248.002; Tue, 5 Jan 2016 23:32:22 -0500
From: Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com>
To: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-isis-pcr.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-pcr.all@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04
Thread-Index: AdFIOzxlaI1ytRdHQEKPp04P2tZcMw==
Date: Wed, 6 Jan 2016 04:32:22 +0000
Message-ID: <E87B771635882B4BA20096B589152EF63AACC68F@eusaamb107.ericsson.se>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.11]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFrrMLMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPgu7pGT1hBus/sFocOvuV1eLqq88s DkweS5b8ZApgjOKySUnNySxLLdK3S+DKmHBvA3vBY/aKoxtOMzYwbmPrYuTkkBAwkWhadoER whaTuHBvPVCci0NI4AijROuVn+wQzjJGiQPNN8Gq2IA6Nuz8zARiiwhUSLzZsZ0FxBYWsJJY vekmG0TcXuL7t0eMELaexLkvj8DiLAIqEl2NF8HqeQV8JRYcXAdmMwJt/n5qDdhMZgFxiVtP 5jNBXCQgsWTPeWYIW1Ti5eN/rBC2ksTH3/PZIep1JBbs/sQGYWtLLFv4mhlivqDEyZlPWCYw Cs9CMnYWkpZZSFpmIWlZwMiyipGjtLggJzfdyHATIzCoj0mwOe5g3NvreYhRgINRiYf3g1dP mBBrYllxZe4hRgkOZiUR3pBioBBvSmJlVWpRfnxRaU5q8SFGaQ4WJXHeRJnGMCGB9MSS1OzU 1ILUIpgsEwenVAOjJlfjvfqj7Kmv2rZn7GJ/ZxVcwarfoWc5nSle77Nb/fW5TxgF3RMCv83l i1cVMHSuOpaqdjh414sKh3n8nvsLlq5NilJee+//ueOyBg/vzXOQ23758cnceu2u2czfn/zb tFpp97LrmbPOznpu+S80lks0s5n1QS0Hj2/pRsPnwW8aspvmbWhUYinOSDTUYi4qTgQApTgT Q2YCAAA=
Archived-At: <http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ILrDjJ0ZTaRC226rWp41lBmziNg>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04
X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
Precedence: list
List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" <gen-art.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/gen-art/>
List-Post: <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art>, <mailto:gen-art-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 06 Jan 2016 04:32:29 -0000

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

For more information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2016-01-05
Telechat Date: 2016-01-07

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I 
have a minor comment that you might wish to address.

* Minor

There is no reference for the format of the Bandwidth fields in Sections 6.3 
and 6.4. I am assuming this refers to the Single Precision format (binary32) 
from IEEE 754. If so, please add an explicit reference to this.

Thanks
Suresh