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Re: [Gen-art] [dmarc-ietf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 05 November 2018 04:33 UTC

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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Page 18: “ptypes” →types
> Page 22: “concocted” → connected?

As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written.

"Concocted" is also correct as written.

Barry

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