Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-06

Pete Resnick <presnick@qualcomm.com> Tue, 22 November 2011 14:18 UTC

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Wait for other changes. This is strictly editorial.

On 11/18/11 9:44 AM, Mark Davis ☕ wrote:
> Sounds good, I can make that change, and search for other isolate t's.
>
> Pete, should I wait for other comments, or go ahead and make and post 
> that change?
>
> Mark
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> On Thu, Nov 17, 2011 at 12:48, Vijay K. Gurbani <vkg@bell-labs.com 
> <mailto:vkg@bell-labs.com>> wrote:
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>     I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>     Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>     <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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>     Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>     you may receive.
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>     Document: draft-davis-t-langtag-ext-06
>     Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
>     Review Date: Nov-17-2011
>     IETF LC End Date: Unknown
>     IESG Telechat date: Dec-01-2011
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>     Summary: This draft is ready as an Informational.
>
>     Major issues: 0
>     Minor issues: 0
>     Nits/editorial comments: 1
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>     Nits:
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>     - For sake of uniformity, I would suggest wrapping the unadorned
>      t with single quotes.  For instance, in S2.1, third paragraph:
>
>      s/The t extension is/The 't' extension is/
>
>      The above is the only unadorned instance I found, but there may
>      be others that I did not check for.
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>     Thanks,
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>     - vijay
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