[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11

Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 22 June 2020 19:50 UTC

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Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2020-06-22
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13
IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

My concerns have been addressed.

I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be
misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the
proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the
-push document): OLD:
    If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels
New:
    If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels