Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 09 April 2015 11:41 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
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Thanks for the review, Alexey!! Jari On 08 Apr 2015, at 17:11, Waltermire, David A. <david.waltermire@nist.gov> wrote: > Thanks Alexey for the review. I'll get your requested change made. I need to work out how best to do this at this stage. > > Thanks, > Dave > > Sent from my iPhone > >> On Apr 8, 2015, at 10:02 AM, "Alexey Melnikov" <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote: >> >> My apologies for the very late review. >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09 >> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >> Review Date: 2015-04-08 >> IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16 >> IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09 >> >> Summary: Ready >> >> Major Concerns: None >> >> Minor Concerns: None >> >> Nits: >> >> In Section 2.1.1: >> >>> * Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be >>> used for evaluation. >> >> Either delete "can be" or "to be". >> >> >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-c… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-u… Waltermire, David A.
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-sacm-u… Jari Arkko