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<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Tue, 21 April 2015 05:29 UTC

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Hi David,

Thank you for the review. 

A new version is available online:

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02 

A diff from the previous version is available at:
http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-02 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Black, David [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
> Envoyé : mardi 21 avril 2015 01:55
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN; alexandre.petrescu@cea.fr; fred@cisco.com;
> General Area Review Team (gen-art@ietf.org)
> Cc : ietf@ietf.org; v6ops@ietf.org; Black, David
> Objet : Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
> Reviewer: David Black
> Review Date: April 20, 2015
> IETF LC End Date: April 20, 2015
> 
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> 	should be fixed before publication.
> 
> This is a short crisp draft on behavior of CIDR prefixes in IPv6
> forwarding
> with respect to the /64 boundary in IPv6 addresses.  It's clear, well
> explained
> easy to understand, plus refreshingly short.  Nicely done!
> 
> Major issues: (none)
> 
> Minor issues: (none)
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: Ok, I found a nit ... and so did idnits ;-).
> 
> -- Abstract
> 
>    Hardware and software
>    algorithms should therefore impose no rules on prefix length, but
>    implement longest-match-first on prefixes of any valid length.
> 
> "algorithms" isn't the right word.
> I suggest "implementations of routing and forwarding"
> 
> idnits pointed out that: A later version (-06) exists of
>      draft-ietf-opsec-v6-05
> 
> Thanks,
> --David
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