Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-25

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 06 December 2018 14:49 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-25
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Roni, thanks for your review. Kent, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Oct 16, 2018, at 12:38 PM, Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>; wrote:
> 
> Fixed the editorial nit in my local copy.
> 
> Thanks,
> Kent
> 
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>;
> Date: Tuesday, October 16, 2018 at 3:45 AM
> To: "gen-art@ietf.org"; <gen-art@ietf.org>;
> Cc: "ietf@ietf.org"; <ietf@ietf.org>;, "draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch.all@ietf.org"; <draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch.all@ietf.org>;, "netconf@ietf.org"; <netconf@ietf.org>;
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-10-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-22
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard Track RFC
> 
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments: 
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> 1. In the editorial note the change log is in appendix D and not A
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