[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-crmf-update-algs-04

[Ines Robles via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-crmf-update-algs-04
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-03-26
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-26
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document updates the cryptographic algorithm requirements for the
Password-Based Message Authentication Code in the Internet X.509 Public Key
Infrastructure Certificate Request Message Format (CRMF).

The document is well written, I have minor comments/questions to the authors.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Nits/Comments:

1- Introduction: "however, these algorithms are no longer
   considered the best choices. " => It would be nice to add 1 or more
   sentences explaining why they are no longer the best choices

2- Page 3: "id-PasswordBasedMAC as presented in Section 4.4 of this document"
It should be perhaps be "id-PasswordBasedMAC as presented in Section 4.4 of
[RFC4211]" ?

3- If this document does not present privacy considerations, should it be
explicitly mentioned in Section 6?

4- Since the new updates include the use of PBMAC1, HMAC-SHA256, AES-GMAC AES.
Should Section 6 include considerations about them or point to place where to
find them? e.g. For information on security considerations for PBMAC1 see
[rfc8018#section-8].

Thank you for this document,

Ines.